I tried to create sort of a news story type piece that highlights the detriments of stretches that are commonly thought as good practice to do before workouts. This ties into my topic choice of fitness and is something I believe should be widely known to everyone. This is why I choice a news or article type style so that it comes off as an informative piece. I did a some research by looking at medical studies that prove what I state as fact so that it would be as true to the truth as possible without exaggerating to such a point that lets people know that stretching is not bad for you for everything, just particular warm ups are not beneficial towards some activities. In adobe I took the best sound bits of my recording of a gym atmosphere to really emphasize the fact that it is a gym. I then put those points as my introduction and at the end of the piece. Overall I think this is a decent piece and I just need to work on the actual story of the piece more so that it flows better and has useful information on what stretches are best for activities and give examples of some basic stretches. I am also not sure if my gym recording exemplifies the idea that it is in fact from a gym and that it is apparent to all listeners.
Article that I used for facts








